The lil red riding hood

 The Little Red Riding Hood

          "Please take this food basket for your sick grandmother who live in a small cottage in the middle of the woods near our village and take care," said the Mother to Little Red Riding Hood.

           On her way to the woods, she met The Big Bad Wolf that asked,
"Where are you going little girl?"
"To my Grandmother's cottage in the middle of the woods," she answered.

           The Big Bad Wolf ran to her Grandma's cottage much much before the Little Red Riding Hood and knocked the door. 
        
           When Grandma opened the door, he locked her up in the cupboard. the wicked wolf wore Grandma's clothes and laid on her bad, waiting for the Little Red Riding Hood.

           Then she reached the cottage. After that she went into her Grandma's room. 

"My! What big eyes you have Grandma!" said The Little Red Riding Hood.
"All the better to see you my dear!" replied the wolf.
"What big ears you have Grandma!" said The Little Red Riding Hood.
"All the better to see you too my dear!" replied the wolf.
"What big teeth you have Grandma!" said The Little Red Riding Hood.
"All the better to eat you!" growled the wolf pouncing on her.

               Little Red Riding Hood screamed and said, " Help!"
Luckily, there was a wood cutter and he helped the little girl and beat the wolf. 
               After that, he rescued her Grandma. With a grateful feeling, Grandma hugged her grand-daughter and The Big Bad Wolf ran away and never to be seen again.

                      THE END
BY:William Jonathan M
Class/Abs:7A-22

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  1. Unknown28 Maret 2016 pukul 01.50

    Komentar ini telah dihapus oleh pengarang.

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  2. Unknown30 Maret 2016 pukul 08.29

    I really like this post of yours. I think that you have used good enough in your past tense. The events in the story are understandable and interesting. I like the way that you put some dialogs in your story but I guess it's a little too much. Overall, you did a nice work!

    BalasHapus
  3. Unknown31 Maret 2016 pukul 02.55

    you have 1 typo.i think this is you best post. i like this story. it is interesting .i think you should change it a bit so your story will be different from the mainstream little red riding hood story and make it more interesting. but its great!

    BalasHapus

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