KPI
18th of feb, KPI (Kebaktian Penyegaran Iman) was held. Held at Anugerah Church. We must got there by 7:30 a.m. and it started at 8 a.m. We sang Church songs and then we started the ceremony after singing Church songs. there were singers, band and dancers. The leader told us about her experience life back then. She lived in a poor family,that couldn't even afford to pay rent or school. It was really sad to hear. She did not believe in God back then, but her friend made her realise that God is exsist. She encourages us to appreciate what we have. Then she prayed for us and asked us to say sorry to people that we have hunted . Then we sang songs again and end the event.


i like the way you describe the event, you put many details. your spelling and grammer is nice.
BalasHapusI am really glad that you chose Easter as your topic because as we know the global event occurred just a few days ago. I think you had paid respect for the Christian readers by telling us more about Easter. It's good that you include how Easter first happened. Your grammar and spelling are quite okay. The picture you provided also makes your post more interesting. In my opinion, I think you should provide more about how Easter is celebrated nowadays. In general, it was great!
BalasHapusI like the way you describe about Easter. I appreciate that you are willing to tell us your readers about how was Easter happened at first. I think you should try to write about how was your Easter going to make your post more interesting to be read. Overall, I think it is quite good. :)
BalasHapusI think that the grammar used in this writing is good enough. You really described in detail on how Easter happened. I like the way that you put some pictures that makes it more interesting. I suggest you could tell us on how you celebrated Easter later on rather than telling how it happened. Overall, you did a great job!
BalasHapusyou need to correct your punctuation in the first paragraph. the paragraph that you used capslock. you made some grammatical errors . but you did good
BalasHapusI think that you used good grammars in your writing. You made it look interesting by putting pictures. Im impressed!:)
BalasHapusI think that you used good grammars in your writing. You made it look interesting by putting pictures. Im impressed!:)
BalasHapusI appreciate that you respect Christianity and I like how you tell your reader how Easter happen in the first place in detail. Your grammar and spelling are okay and I suggest you to write about how is Easter celebrated by you just to make it more interesting. Otherwise good work!
BalasHapusI appreciate that you respect Christianity and I like how you tell your reader how Easter happen in the first place in detail. Your grammar and spelling are okay and I suggest you to write about how is Easter celebrated by you just to make it more interesting. Otherwise good work!
BalasHapus