SINGAPORE FIELD TRIP
Me ,my teachers and my friends went to Singapore for a study tour. We stayed there for 6 days. We left to Singapore on the 20th of February and went back to indonesia ,26th of February. We stayed in a hostel it's clean and comfortable too,
On the first day, we didn't go to school because it was Saturday. So we went to the Science Center. There was scientific experiments everywhere there it's nice and there was a vr or virtual reality.To be honest it is exciting. After that we went to Jcube mall. We ate dinner there. Me ,owen ,michelle ,darren ,etc ate at Nando's. It was delicious. They gave us the menu ,yeah so we ordered the grilled chicken package. It's about $36 more or less but we divided it by 7/6 :v
On the second day, we went to church. The church is not as big as i thought,there were people there but it's not much. I thought that the church can't spoke indonesian but they spoke Indonesian. I was amazed .It took long really long because they have to translate it to Chinese too. After church we went to Universal Studios. It was very hot. I only got to ride 5 rides ,it was exciting but yeah it was hot and i didnt like to play things like that.After this tiring day we went to hostel and some of us slept and the others did other things.
On the third day, we went to school. After that we went to Chinatown. I bought some souvenirs for the andersonians ,it was fun but it's tiring too. After that we went to the hostel and slept. I was impressed by the things there.
The next day we went to school again. Then we went to Marina Gardens by the Bays. It was only filled with beautiful plats and we took pictures and it's a lot of fun but i fought with some of my friends. This day was bad but it was good too
On the fifth day, we went to school again. After that we went to Bugis Junction. At Bugis we did shop and it was exciting Then we went back home and we slept at 9
On the last shopping day we went to Orchard. it was the last day, we bought many things. Unfortunately i felt a little bit not healthy and i was sad because it was the last day but we enjoyed it.This was the worst and the best day in singapore
Finally it's the last day ,we got up at 6.30
Then ate breakfast after that we packaged things
and the bus picked us
After that we were going to the. airport and waited there for 2 hours
Then went home and arrived at 12.15
This is some picts
This is me with andersonian ,we cooked a pizza and it's delicious
I was using a sweater there the colour is orange ,it was fun :)
This was the most excting part ,we rode roller coaster.
The one that next to me is really funny. He didn't ride a single ride;v
because he was scared
This was in Bandung when we will go to singapore
I really happy thanks to my parents and God ,so i can go there ;)
i felt sorry for one of my friend name Valencia, she was sick so she can't join the trip



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BalasHapusI found some mistakes in grammar. You should improve your skill in grammar to make a better story. Some sentences are not understandable. I found some sentences that are not supposed to be combined with other sentences. You should seperate them with a good punctuation marks. Overall is good :)
BalasHapusI appreciate that you are willing to share your experience in Singapore to us. I think that you need just a little bit more details to describe the activities you did there. Your grammar is quite poor and you need to improve. You also need to pay more attention to your punctuation. The structure of your sentence must be better because there are some sentences that are not understandable. The pictures you include made your post more interesting. I'm glad that you gave captions for each pictures so that we could know what the picture was about. I think you did quite good!
BalasHapusI think your composition is good enough, but there are some grammatical errors in it. You need to improve your grammar and use full stops at the end of your sentences. Inputting pictures with captions makes your post more interesting :)
BalasHapusThis is so far my favorite post. You included pictures and used good tenses and grammars. Good job William:)
BalasHapusYou have wrote a good post, but there are some grammatical errors i found in your writing. You need to practice more for your tenses, Good luck!
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