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EASTER
EASTER IS CHRISTIAN MOST IMPORTANT EVENT, BECAUSE THIS EVENT IS TO CELEBRATE THE RESSURECTION OF GOD USUALLY IT IS ON A DAY IN MARCH 21-APRIL 25
Easter is the day when we celebrate Jesus Christ rising from the dead. Jesus is the Son of God and heroically gave His life to die for our sins. On the third day after He died -- the day we now celebrate as Easter Sunday -- His friends went to His grave, and found that He had risen from the dead. They saw an angel who told them, "Don't be afraid! I know you are looking for Jesus, who was crucified. He isn't here! He has been raised from the dead, just as He said it would happen."Jesus rose from the dead on Easter Sunday; now He offers to you the gift of eternal life and forgiveness of sins. This is the true story of Easter, and how it can change your life
Easter egg are decorated egg for celebrating this event, it is a symbol of the empty tomb
i like the way you describe the event, you put many details. your spelling and grammer is nice.
BalasHapusI am really glad that you chose Easter as your topic because as we know the global event occurred just a few days ago. I think you had paid respect for the Christian readers by telling us more about Easter. It's good that you include how Easter first happened. Your grammar and spelling are quite okay. The picture you provided also makes your post more interesting. In my opinion, I think you should provide more about how Easter is celebrated nowadays. In general, it was great!
BalasHapusI like the way you describe about Easter. I appreciate that you are willing to tell us your readers about how was Easter happened at first. I think you should try to write about how was your Easter going to make your post more interesting to be read. Overall, I think it is quite good. :)
BalasHapusI think that the grammar used in this writing is good enough. You really described in detail on how Easter happened. I like the way that you put some pictures that makes it more interesting. I suggest you could tell us on how you celebrated Easter later on rather than telling how it happened. Overall, you did a great job!
BalasHapusyou need to correct your punctuation in the first paragraph. the paragraph that you used capslock. you made some grammatical errors . but you did good
BalasHapusI think that you used good grammars in your writing. You made it look interesting by putting pictures. Im impressed!:)
BalasHapusI think that you used good grammars in your writing. You made it look interesting by putting pictures. Im impressed!:)
BalasHapusI appreciate that you respect Christianity and I like how you tell your reader how Easter happen in the first place in detail. Your grammar and spelling are okay and I suggest you to write about how is Easter celebrated by you just to make it more interesting. Otherwise good work!
BalasHapusI appreciate that you respect Christianity and I like how you tell your reader how Easter happen in the first place in detail. Your grammar and spelling are okay and I suggest you to write about how is Easter celebrated by you just to make it more interesting. Otherwise good work!
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